Wednesday, 11 May 2011

The crime


Last week I saw a crime while I was walking down the street to the market. There were two men stole the money from one lady. Suddenly I hid behind the wall and watched them stole the money from the woman's bag ,but she didn't know because she was talking with the seller. And I was calling to the police about the crime that happened in the market. Then I ran through to the woman and told her that the crime stole her money. She was really surprise, but I told her that I already called the police and also the police arrived at the market, and she said she thanks to me. Finally the police have arrested the two crime , but when the police gave the money to her she laughed and said to the crime '' Ha ha ha! today you very unlucky ''. The crime said '' why?'' the woman said '' why you not looked carefully the money that you stole isn't the real money the real money is in my pocket ''. The crime said '' Oh! shit why!!! now what can we do?'', the police said '' so go to the prison''. The police and the woman said thanks to me again, and the crime they took them to the police station to put them to the prison. After that I came back home with a happy face and I told my family about what happened in the market.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Lynecta, good work.

    Remember 'criminal' is what we call the person who did the crime.

    So 'I was calling to the police about the crime' is correct but '...told her that the crime stole her money.' is not. (It should be 'told her the criminal stole the money.')

    I enjoyed reading your story.

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