Last week I saw a crime
I was walking down the street then I saw the car theft. He was crushing the car window then he got in the car and drive very fast then I tried to calling the police by the publish telephone then I remembered the car number.The car number is A-2314 then the police came and he asked me about where did he go then I told him he go this way then he called police force to surround the thief after the police caught the thief he just say to me '' good job kid and thank for calling me to catch this thief and here some money '' he gave me 50 pound and I felt proud and say ''thank''. That is the proud day I ever had.
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You should change "publish telephone" public telephone andwhat do you mean by he crushed the car window? Did he sit on it? If not you should change it to he broke the car window
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What a smart boy knowing what to do in the right time. You are just like a grown up man :)
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