Wednesday, 11 May 2011

The Murderer


Last week I saw crime. I was walking down the street near the park. Suddenly I saw two man riding on moto and was carrying with the weapon but I follow them for looking what happened. They didn't see me And then they went near to the one man that riding on the same road for murder his moto. They were telling him to stop the moto but he knew they want to murder him and he drive very fast for hiding. But the murderer try follow him. They drive very fast for follow him but the road end. Murderer get out the moto and go near the man. "If you want my moto don't kill me please give me alive"the man said."But if you want alive don't told anyone or a police, if you tell them I will kill you"murderer said. They take his moto and get out that street. I follow the murderer and I called the police and tell the direction.
After 10 minutes ago, the police go there and arrested the murderer."Who was the victim"the police ask me."He was my friend's uncle"I reply. After 20 minutes ago, the victim was arrived the police station. "It was dangerous but you try to follow the murderer and tell direction to the police" the victim said. "It the story that I never saw and happened so I decide to help you"I said. And then the police get me for asking what happening.
After that at the end, I went back home by have an experience for protect my self.

3 comments:

  1. It must be very scary then. I also think you were lucky in that situation. What would happen if there were no one hearing you yelling for help?

    Anyway, it is a very good piece of writing with fascinating story development.

    Very well done, Nina!

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  2. Nice! I love the action and the thrilling scene. I love how you mention it.

    Mickey

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  3. I love your story it is a very good post.Sopheaktra

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