Pich is a girl who was study in the college. She liked the design subject. She was a very good student, all the time she usually try to found out and think of the best design for her own. She was very good, in her house she always change direction when she could found a new style.
One day she though 'if I have a chance to design in a house Which was big, I would do it for my best, and make it very very good looking. Then she though a style for that house , She draw it, and keep it very secret. She always do that when she has already though. All her plane was very good.
one day she took a test to design a house and the teacher made all of the student to draw a very good design. Then Pich took her design that she has already make. She though 'now I can do it' The handout day came and she give that design to her teacher. Two day later her teacher tell the result 'the best for this year was Pich's design' When she knew that, She was very happy, and she got the prize.Her design were made to have a competition in the country, But still she was the best, and she got the gold medal.
Then she made to design a house of the richest man in the world, This is her wish since she study. and she did it very good. She was very famous. she become the best designer.All of her design was very good.
Makky, your writing keeps getting better. This was a good story told very clearly!
ReplyDeleteNext time try this. *and she did it very well* sounds better than *and she did it very good*
Remember too that *She became the best design* should be *designer* Just like you wrote in your Title.
There is some good grammar here, though. Keep up the good work!
wow amazing story. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeletethank you!
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