Friday 27 May 2011

An exciting day


Last month at I went to my homeland and I saw the foreigners rode on the bus and they came to visit there. When they arrived there the people at there was very happy and prepared the food for the visitor. Some people were going to the market and some were manage their house for the foreigner relax. Also some foreigner were held the citizens to cook dinner, some relaxed on the house, some were walking from one house to one house to visit the citizens at there, some played with the children, some were taking the picture of the village, some went to see the rubber trees.

A foreigner of all was very friendly. her name's Claris. She's from Chinese. She's 20 years old. She's a doctor. She was playing with children and taking pictures of them The children were very happy and exciting. Claris took the pictures and gave to children watch,. she was very nice and she's very beautiful. The children love her very much and she told the story to the children by one guide waited for translate in Khmer to them. Claris was kidding with the old man and woman at there When the time for dinner the foreigners came all together and ate dinner. They didn't care about the food there and admired the food was very delicious and great smell. The citizens were very happy to hear that. While they ate dinner yet they were relaxing to be power full to go to Phnom Penh. At 3:00 they got up and washed their body(have a shower). At 4:30 they called the citizens to come all and they gave the money, food, thing for use every day(rice, towels, sugar, net...). About the children they gave a lots of chocolate and candy, but they told them after they ate its they had to clean their teeth. At 6:00 they had to go to Phnom Penh. At 10:00 they arrived Phnom Penh with a very happy day in their mind. They said they love Cambodia and love the citizens in Cambodia because the citizens like to smile every time, friendly, nice.

Alright Cambodia's citizens think that smile, friend, nice are very important for them, and for people around their.

2 comments:

  1. Whoo hoo, Bormey! This is your best writing on the blog! Excellent job. I liked that the children had to clean their teeth!

    Have a look at this sentence. *When they arrived there the people at there was very happy...*

    Better would be- *When they arrived there the people were very happy...*

    Keep writing Bormey, because I enjoyed your story.

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  2. Thank teacher. I am very happy. I will try to improve my writing more.

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