In this forest! we called it the JUNGLE! In the jungle, no one could survived. But one strange, wild man was living in the jungle with all the wild animals. How strange was that? but let's find out! The man was called the Hungle! The hungle man never scared
of anything, beside he ate lizard, snake, rabee , polat and other strange animals. He likes to swing around the jungle! and killed dangerous wild animals for his meal! He also made friends with dinosaur! How strange??? Now let's go back to the dinosaur!The huge dinosaur was called the GIANTNOSAUR! It's was the biggest dinosaur in the whole jungle! It was also the hungle man enemy! It's strong, brave and powerful dinosaur. The giantnosaur ate crocodiles, sharks, tigers, lions, octopuses and other wild animals, beside it didn't need to drink water for 1 year and also it could live for more longer that a hundreds of years. The giantnosaur like climbing trees, but everytime when it climb! it never succeed, because every trees that it climbed are falling down! It's too big to climb a tree!!! The funny thing was..........it scared of blood and a ugly dirty caterpillar! How dump was that!Suddenly one day!!! The giantnosaur asked for a fight with the hungle man and the gaintnosaur said"if you lose... you need to get outta here forever" and they accepted the challenge!
Before the fight, the giantnosaur thought that the hungle man was gonna lose, but the hungle man knew the giantnosaur weakness! So the fight was gonna be more interesting!!! They had a fight! The fight between the giantnosaur and the hungle man. They use the monkey to judged! When they were fighting, the hungle man played a trick on the giantnosaur. The hungle man smashed the tomato and put a caterpillar on the giantnosaur foot! When the giantnosaur saw it he thought it was a real blood, sunddenly the giantnosaur fell down to lose and it hold up a white flag. So it mean the hungle man was the winner! "But that not fair" Giantnosaur said sadly! from now on.......... the strongest is the HUNGLE MAN! The giantnosaur left sadly and went to lived in the sea................
The END!!!Thank for reading! Enjoy!!!!!!!: )
Hi Lyda, here are my thoughts on your post.
ReplyDelete* It made me laugh- so it must be a good story, right? Right! It was a great story!
* I especially like the bit about the mad scientist animals from our earlier writing. Rabbee and Polat- hee hee!
* Hungle man- good name!
*That the giantosaur was scared of blood and caterpillars was clever and funny.
* I felt a bit sad that he had to go and live in the sea. (so again, good writing)
* Check out this sentence- *The giantnosaur leave sadly and went to lived in the sea...................* Better would be- *The giantnosaur left sadly and went to live in the sea...*
* And look at this-*When they were fighting, the hungle man had a trick on the giantnosaur.* We usually say *played a trick*
*A giantnosaur trying to climb trees? Very funny!
* This is one of the best stories on the blog- keep it up!