Everyone in the world have learn to cook from his/her grandmother, mother, aunt or someone else that can cook . There was man that like cooking very very much . His name is John . He was born in England . He lives in the city called London . He lives alone . He likes cooking very much . He has learn to cook when he was 12 years old . He learn to from his father because he doesn't has mother . His mother died when he was 2 years old . His father is a big chef in the famous restaurant in France . He can cook breakfast , lunch and dinner for everyone and himself . He used to cook for only 5-10 minutes . Sometime people in England rent him to cook for a big party or for a birthday party . When he was 19 years old his father and him want to open a small restaurant for help his family . 2 years later he has got what he want when he was 19 years old he want to open a small restaurant to help his family but now he has got a very big restaurant that was in the middle of London that was own by his father . John doesn't want own the restaurant because he want to be a big chef like his father . One day , in London there was a competition . John has went to the competition . Finally , John got the prize of $100,000 for help his father open a very big restaurant in the world that was under the water .
Friday 27 May 2011
The cooking man
Everyone in the world have learn to cook from his/her grandmother, mother, aunt or someone else that can cook . There was man that like cooking very very much . His name is John . He was born in England . He lives in the city called London . He lives alone . He likes cooking very much . He has learn to cook when he was 12 years old . He learn to from his father because he doesn't has mother . His mother died when he was 2 years old . His father is a big chef in the famous restaurant in France . He can cook breakfast , lunch and dinner for everyone and himself . He used to cook for only 5-10 minutes . Sometime people in England rent him to cook for a big party or for a birthday party . When he was 19 years old his father and him want to open a small restaurant for help his family . 2 years later he has got what he want when he was 19 years old he want to open a small restaurant to help his family but now he has got a very big restaurant that was in the middle of London that was own by his father . John doesn't want own the restaurant because he want to be a big chef like his father . One day , in London there was a competition . John has went to the competition . Finally , John got the prize of $100,000 for help his father open a very big restaurant in the world that was under the water .
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Theany, this is your best writing on the blog. Well done!
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Good work and some good grammar, here! Oh, and I like the title of the story, too.
Don't forget to put your name in the *Label* though.
cook is the good exercise, too.
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