Friday 27 May 2011

The stupid man was wait for the pizza deliver

There was a man who has no house and he live in his car,but he is a rich man (he is stupid because he don't buy a house). Then one day he deliver a pizza for his breakfast he was wait until night and he was starving and angry then he start drive to the pizza place then he saw a light of a moto it was a pizza deliver and he stop the car then he ask ''what took you so long I delivered you in the morning'' then the pizza deliver said ''sir I was search for you all day because you sir don't give me the address'' the man said ''sorry''

And how dumb is that!

2 comments:

  1. Techsor, this is a funny and creative story. It made me laugh!

    Remember to check your verbs. Look at this-*There was a man who has no house and he live in his car,but he is a rich man*

    Better would be-* There was a man who had no house and he lived in his car, but he was a rich man.*

    Good story and I like your imagination!

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  2. thank!would do it better next time

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