Friday 27 May 2011

THE GREAT KING OF THE DINOSAUR

One upon time There was very huge dinosaur name REX.REX was looking for a food to eat suddenly REX saw a very huge dinosaur was eating a plant.REX saw the other dinosaur and REX was running to other dinosaur to bit. The other dinosaur saw REX ran and The other dinosaur thought REX wanted to ate him.The other dinosaur fought with REX about 1 hour.The other dinosaur was die by REX bit the heck. REX was thought he was a strongest dinosaur than everyone in this world.So REX walked to bit the other dinosaur and REX saw one dinosaur biggest and strongest than him.The biggest dinosaur ate meat like REX too and The biggest dinosaur name dragon commando.The biggest dinosaur saw REX and The biggest dinosaur ran straight to REX .REX was ran straight to the biggest dinosaur and REX bit the biggest dinosaur heck. Finally The biggest dinosaur was die by REX bit the heck and REX has became the king of the dinosaur.
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  1. Unknown30 May 2011 at 10:45

    Interesting story, Ratanak.

    Look at this sentence: *REX was looked for a food to ate..*

    Better would be: *Rex was looking for food to eat...*

    I like the name 'Dragon Commando!

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  2. Create A Country 930 May 2011 at 14:31

    wow amazing story

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  3. Create A Country 930 May 2011 at 14:35

    thank you teacher to correct my mistake

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  4. Create A Country 931 May 2011 at 16:46

    wow amazing story

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